I really like this!! You can see that this was written from the heart!! It is very emotional and well written. I'm sure your mother would be proud if you ever gice this poem to her
I really like this piece of writing!! It gives a sense of being connected with the four elements. They can very well reflect our emotions and I like the emotions which you have matched the elements with. Very thought provoking!! Well done!!!
Lovely work!! It makes you think about other life as well as your own. So many people wonders what it would be like to be something else. Human life is full of stresses and strains and it would be so nice to be free. But it seems the only true freedom now a days is in the untouched nature. Very well written!!
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