You've painted a picture well, and I want to read more! I can nearly relate, as a reader wants to, and I'm thirsty for more than a glimpse. It teases of a past life memory to me. I would like to see more detail of the field between you and the shacks for some reason, of the faces of the poor souls living there.
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