I loved this piece. Primarily of course because it is very well written. But also because I have always been fascinated by Al-Andulas and that particular period in human history when the Arabs ruled parts of Spain and also because the names of characters are coincidentally shared by some very close people in my life. Bravo! Keep it up. I'll b waiting for more. Take care.
So many people do this, they do not say
What should have been said right away,
Never ever wait , not even a day,
Tell them how much you love and need
Tell them how sorry how sad you are
If you don't you will always carry this scar
I think I rather like it! I like the simplicity of the text. I like the brevity. I like the fact that you are writing what your heart wants you to write. I'll be waiting for more.
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