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Review of Faith vs. Fear  
Review by Stefan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful poem! I love the flow the poem had and the message was good too. What I liked most about it though, was the feeling I got when I read it. I've always been able to sense when someone really means what they say and the energy I felt from that poem tells me that you really put a part of yourself into this poem. The only thing I got caught on was the line with "God's Word...." That line seemed to have a few too many consonants compared to the rest of the poem, kinda throws the tempo off slightly.

All things said and done, beautiful piece of work. You have much to be proud of!

To the writings that come from the deepest places in our hearts,
Stephen
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Review of True Love  
Review by Stefan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beuatiful poem...I liked the image it formed in my mind as I was reading it. Very appealing subject too, always an easy one for many different people to identify with. It seems that you wrote that from experience which is helpful, because it provides an element of feeling to the poem that nothing else can. Keep up the good work!
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