I think it's a great story. There's so much variety in it, you're sure to get at least one that you like. I really hope we can have other great chapters.
Why is it that there are only female costumes? This really ticks me off: it takes off a lot of choices in male characters that could be very interesting to transform into. You don't need only female, I'm seriously getting sick of having so many different stories about transformation and nearly all of those are guys becoming women. Be a little more creative.
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