Hello. This is a nice spiritual and uplifting piece, which can be translated in many ways. For me it painted an image of a human soul arriving in heaven. Deep verses, it was nice to find something like that, although there were a few punctuation errors. Good luck on your further works.
Hello. That is a very nice concept of love you have portrayed in this story. Well, it might not be nice, but it shows how different can or expressions be. I feel like you could've written more, even up to a short story of it!
A nice piece of work, stay intellectual.
-Ryan
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