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Rated: E | (3.5)
A very nice essay! A few of your turns of phrase were especially appealing, such as "blessed silence of the empty house." You did have a few grammatical errors, mostly punctuation. In particular, your usage of the semi-colon was a bit off. A very fine essay though, and an enjoyable read!
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