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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked it. It's not the type of book I would read but I know a lot of people would. I think you should add some people talking though. I think that would make it a bit better.Nice detials though. This chapter shows true creativity and it shows you put a lot of thought into this. for me, I stare at a computer screen for about 2 minutes and a thought just comes to me. The whole story plays in my head and I just, write it down as different person or whoever I thought of. But this story is very creative and shows a lot of thought. It's really good
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