As I write poetry I can only give my idea of what I would read for light enjoyment in prose/fiction and this was something that kept me interested in it all the way to the end. So I think you've done a great job here.
This is good narrative and prose writing, it perhaps gets weighed down a little with description of relationships but on the whole I was not wanting to stop until I reached a conclusion.
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