I read and really loved "Glass shoes".I felt the pain and the emotion put into it,a real cry for help it filled me with strife,It is a beutiful thing how you put your heart and soul into the piece,it is something all of us are trying to do but few accomplish.
I don't usually point out my favourite parts in the poem but the last line shocked me to the very core,truly you have a wonderful talent,I can not say anything to critisize nor point out anything,just keep on writing!Maybe you would check a few things I have in my portfolio, it isn't much but please enjoy yourself and send me review of anything you like!Maybe you would even suggest what to read!
Looking through the poetry section I never knew I would find so many treasures but "Masochist" really is something that shook my heart to the very core.Something I am trying to do myself!It's true passion is overwhelming.
Even though it has a sad touch,it has the power to make a person think about himself and others,thank you for the wonderful poem and maybe,if I am worthy you will take your time to read some things I wrote!
Love and care untill the very end!
Fate Eternal.
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