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Review by R. Alan Ferguson
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I like this alot. When Glabe goes home and finds the place trashed. I knew something was going to happen. My heart was thudding against my chest.
This is well written and draws you in and holds on to you like ...like ...well like a hungry zombie. lol
You should revise it some more though, or if you like I could do it when I get a minute. But you have to promise you will edit it even little if I do the work.
Keep writing cause I really want to know what happens next.

I know, not a great review, but I do my best.
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