Thanks Maryann For the wonderful tale. i really enjoyed it, it seem so real, well its ficition. i was curious and kept smiling cause i was imaging the little girl with a beautiful mom. i loved the way the little girl spoke so highly of her mom, despite what people said about her, she inspires her daughter and encouraged her to read good books, i love the great gatsby too. that mom's goodness can be liken to mine excerpt mine is not a fashionista. thanks and happy holidays. spreading peace in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
The pirate's lady part one by Princess Megan Rose is a story about Amarisa who lives in st Augustine Florida and works in a bar. She has lost her parents to death years ago, she is beautiful and is sixteen years old.
One she met a handsome pirate Von pearl who fell in love with her. Von pearl defended her honour by beating up Carlos who was harassing her sexually. The Two began seeing each other and Von pearl reavealed he was from England, but didnt mention he was looking for his lost baby sister.
Unknow to him his sister is little Sophia and Amarisa is like a big sister to her. Amarisa now back doesn't know that Carlos lies in wait for her and wants her the worst way.
The story its an interesting love story. Von pearl is a responsible and handsome man though his age is not reavealed, his sister is 8 so i assume he is a young man. Amarisa is also responsible and strong too, she was able to take care of herself after her parent death, she has a moral value and shows it when she didnt invite Von Pearl into her home even though she wanted him in.
The description used in the story was prefect and it is well organised and arranged. I look forward to reading the second book.
The story is interesting, and it makes me curious too. Its well organised, great description.
The charaters Katrina and Daniel, are they friends, kids or adult? Because i don't understand their relationship or how they happen to have the same dream or similar dreams.
Like i said great story, but try to explain in details the characters background.
I have read thoughts on the angel child. That was after reading this. The poem was great, i kept wondering how could one be so creative i felt the emotions the writer was trying to convey until i realised it was real. I'm single yet i understand what it means to lose a child. I believe the baby is in heaven ane glad that he is still remembered. Smiling Cute angel, you have a great Mom who loves you no matter what.
wow I wish you could write more. Its not short but its okay and understable. Charlie and Victor are in a battle field, and Victor had a smile on his face even when both of were injured. Is Victor alive cos he doesnt derserve death.
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