I really liked your poem. It speaks miles of the girl with the "Judas Lips" and your tone and rhythm do well to depict that. Keep up the good work . And Happy New Year !!
Loved your writing as usual .... I have not been on this website for some time now and I have to be honest .... It was very refreshing to read your work again ..... LOL .... Would love to read more ...... Keep Writing and good luck with your future projects ..... . .
This was a very powerful piece that you have written , and a very gripping one at that . I really liked your style of writing and would definitely like to read more of you work in the near future . Keep up the good work and keep writing . PS : Have a happy new year ahead of you .
This was a very powerful piece and a very gripping one at that . You are a very talented writer and it can certainly be seen through the paragraphs that you wrote . I will definitely be looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future .
This is a very powerful piece and I really liked it . You explained the security you feel from having your " umbrella " very well and also the dilemma you feel about parting with it . Also , how you felt when you finally let him go and stood exposed in the rain was very graphic and gripping . This was a very good analogy that you wrote about . Keep up the good work and keep writing .
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