I enjoyed this piece. It was consistent, rhythmic and your took the reader along with you nicely.
It was well written and your expressed yourself very well. I look forward to seeing more of your work. thank you for sharing your gift. Good Work!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I love this piece. It captures the very essence of a writer's soul. Thank you for sharing.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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Very interesting and well written piece. I enjoyed your flow and rhythm. thank you for the read. Good Work!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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Your style is unique and you captivate your reader with your depth and expression. Thank you for sharing your gift. Good Work!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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This is a very powerful emotional pull for the reader. You expressed yourself very well. Thank you for sharing. Good Work!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I enjoyed this piece. You have a very unique style which held my attention throughout.
Thank you for sharing, keep writing!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I enjoyed this piece. The way you approached this topic was unique and very creative. Thank you for sharing. Good Work!!
Please, consider correcting the following error, so your writing will be read, as you intended.
Line 11 - "among" not amomg
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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This was a well written, cute and entertaining poem.I enjoyed reading the unfolding of this episode of your life. I look forward to reading more in the future. Good work and thank you for sharing.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I enjoyed your flow, expression and style. You held me throughout and took me along your journey. Thank you for sharing, good work!
Please consider correcting the following errors, so the reader isn't distracted from what you intended.
Line 3 - "Train"
Line 8 - "terrifies"
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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Your style is unique and your expression and imagery is very good. You had me feeling the sunset and knowing the renewal. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I enjoyed this piece. It was the first time I had experienced this style. Thank you for sharing and broadening my horizon. WELL DONE!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I liked the way you struggle between right and wrong. How you take her feelings into consideration and show your integrity throughout. You expressed yourself well and your flow was smooth and held my attention. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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This piece has beautiful imagery and flow. I enjoyed your unique style and the way you held my attention throughout. Thank you for the read and keep writing.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I enjoyed your style and flow. You have a rhythm that opens the mind and slowly pulls us along. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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This was a wonderful read! I enjoyed your flow and rhythm, it led me right along. You kept my heart wanting you to find everything you need.Good work. You have a gift. thank you for sharing.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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Again, another wonderful and haunting piece. You have a gift for expression, I wish it weren't filled with so much personal pain. I wish you the best, keep writing.
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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This piece is wonderful! Your style was smooth and direct. The imagery was vivid. You held my heart and mind throughout!
Thank you for sharing! Good work!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I can't even find the words for this piece. It's so well done. Thank you for sharing. Good Work!!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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Your heartache is felt in ever verse, you took mine softly, slowly and sadly with yours.I have no words!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I found your poem very interesting and heartfelt. You question and answer yourself, the true balancing act of one's mind and heart. You held my attention throughout. I don't understand the parentheses. Were you "thinking", whispering.....? Good work!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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I enjoyed your style very much. The imagery was great and the flow smooth. thank you for the read. Good work!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Sincerely,
Rose
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You have a very interesting style and I enjoyed it very much. I look forward to reading more of your works.
Good Read!!
Never allow the ink of your heart to stop flowing!
Rose
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