Short and sweet are two words I'd use to describe this piece of work.
I loved the last verse about clicking heels but not getting home.
I couldn't help but want more! Perhaps think of continuing and lengthening it a bit more...
Enjoyed it ;D keep writing!
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Rose
AWWW!
I absolutely loved it!
So sweet and thoghtful, if you ever decide to read this out to your special lady; you'll have her in the palm of your hand :)
Nice job!
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