WOW amazing poem lots of emotion I felt the words as I read each one very good write and very powerful in so words used I cant pick out any spelling or faults on your part i know mine have a few just cant find them at the moment but your an amazing poet keep up the good writing and i look forwar to reading more from you in the near future
wow good story I can relate although I know its fiction im also from the military and know about killing and death it was a powerful story for me anyways your an awsome writer and an inspiring one as well I hope you dont mind me asking but were you in the military is that where you got the idea from you dont have to answer just me being carious well keep up the good writing and I look forward to reading me from you in the near future
wow sounds like my life now my grand mother had cancer and died but she was my bestfriend i dont talk to any of my family havent in seven years and I have terminal lung cancer I work and wright poems to keep my mind off it and i know the out come in the end but for that one second it dosent bother me cause im thinking about my poems and im happy again I enjoyed reading your biography please share more i look forward to reading more from you
WOW amazing poem it shows who you are as a person lots of passtion i couldent of expressed it better myself I loved it I like helping people fix there poems but i havent found anything about this one that I could fix it was amazing thanks for posting it im glad im not the only one who posts poems like this its refreshing to see i have lots of spelling mistakes in one of mine and cant seem to find them maybe you can help me thanks and have a great day you with do great things thanks for the write keep up the amazing work
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