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I am always in search for correct punctuation and have many questions about it myself. I did notice a few areas with commas maybe missing or maybe put in a place it shouldn't be, but like I said, I am still learning so I could be wrong. Is Hannah his daughter and Crystal a friend? I was confused a bit, but perhaps I don't know the story of Jack Spears. Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
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