Great job, enjoyed it very much. This is so similar to some of the stuff I've been writing-The action and phrasing, I mean, not the story. And I only say that because it's my favorite type to read. I can see myself being a fan of your novels, and would love to see what kind of characters you bring to life. Keep it up. I look forward to checking out your port too.
You write well. It flows well and your dialogue portions are good too. The descriptivness is straightforward, with a strong use of vocabulary. Well done.
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