It's a good poem, but I struggle to read through it, there is not any flow to it, and it seems like something is missing. Keep writing, you have so much potential.
Loved it, it is so true, everyone is scared and need a song like this to give them courage to try. Love your voice also, it will help other people to get the courage needed to face everyday challenges.
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