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Review by Godsloveshown Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Why do we live for today
as though we have tomorrow?

Pushing back prayer
and holding on to sorrow?

why do we believe our wealth is it
when all that we have is but a gift?

Salvation is ours
It was bought with a price.

When we accept it
what is nice no longer is nice

we look at the world appreciting god's work
Knowing God's grace has allowed us breath.

Why are'nt we all Christians
Basking in his glory

Just giving him praise
for the things he has done

This poem was excellent
Keep writing the truth and about the Truth
YHWH's poet

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Review by Godsloveshown Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Life is so short
this poem brings a smile.
It is your smile to share
Your gift not to bear.

The beginning is perfect
because it is yours
Poetry is for persons
not imagery or verse

You have found your style that reflects who you are
keep writing the truth...from within
and by the way train up your child how he should grow.
and leave it to Christ to make the rest of his life meaningful



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Review by Godsloveshown Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Angels come in the flesh
to bring smiles to weary sould
to bting joy to those in need
and salvation through their words to those who reject.

One visited me once also
I reacted the same
It's amazing.
Its always better when you dont ask but still receive.

i've told you before and I'll tell you again
write on!
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