Good stuff. As are most of your creations/writings, this is really creative and causes the reader to ponder over the meaning to the poem. Write on Bestie....
This is certainly an interesting story.
It seems like it definitely has metaphorical overtones (or undertones?) of describing human emotions - more specifically "love" or loss of love? Introspection perhaps?
I enjoyed the story - it made me think (which is a good characteristic of an "abstract" story like this).
It could use some work on the grammar and sentence structure - that would make it a bit easier for the reader. It would also make the story flow better. I don't think it needs anything in regards to the "content" but would benefit from an editor going through it and simply cleaning it up a bit.
I do really like the story and enjoyed reading it! Write on.
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