I enjoyed your use of corporeal imagery, especially in the second stanza where you list traits which aren't seen as conventionally beautiful but to the narrator are exquisite. It's definitely strange seeing the point of view of someone who if nothing else is a stalker, and in a sense you feel sorry for him when his art is destroyed and when he takes a beating. Overall a good work which definitely makes the reader think.
This is great as a short one-off story though I feel you could extend on it quite some bit. I definitely got a kick out of the idea of dressing up as death to scare old people and going commando of all things. I like your style of short, snappy sentences but feel that you should balance them out with more description and complex sentences. Overall a good work, but I wish it was longer.
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