What a pleasant surprise to have opened your site and found this treasure. Alot of emotions were poured from the heart in this work. Pearls of wisdom and truth resounded throughout your piece. Well written and except for one misspelled word it was perfect.Annie
I have never given a "5" to anyone. You have written well, grammar awesome and the best part, you have written about Jesus. Your poem was so beautiful and so true. It is an inspiration to all who read. Keep up the Lord's work and you will go far in this life. Annie
This is such a wonderfully written piece. Psalms 91 is my favorite, too. Written with such conviction. He truly is a "lifter up" of our heads. I really enjoyed the spiritual aspect of your story. May your feet always reside on the rock. Will look forward to reading more of your work. Annie
That was a truly wonderful and delight piece of work. You were able to take a phrase and create a short story that was indeed an inspiration to all. Something good can come from a rainy day. Good luck ii the contest. Keep writing and success will surely come. Annie
Your words ring so true. Life is a precious gift from above. You seem to have successfully put into words your life experiences. Enjoyed reading your piece. Yoou paragraghs were well formed and your grammar was good. The best part I found was in the pearls of wisdom that could be found. "If you think life is a gift, on a daily basis you shall get a spiritual lift," was one of my favorites. Annie
Oh, how wonderfully written this piece is. Hats off to a job well done. Wish I had your way with words. What I liked most: Resting it's wings after a long journey, it burst out in songs of telling tells,Of enchantment of splendor. Thank you for an awesome read. Annie
That was really a precious poem describing marriage. It flowed well. Always knew where I was at. Grammar needs a couple of corrections, but on a whole, I liked it a whole lot. Will look forward to reading more of your poems. Welcome to writing.com. I am a newbie writer, too. Keep those fingers typing. Annie
Thank you for an enlightening article concerning the Muslim faith. There are alot of misconceptions about different religions. However, I did not agree with your title. Some may feel it is derogatory toward others and I gathered that was what you were so opposed to in your article. Other than that, I will keep an open mind and look forward to more of your writings. By the way, I have had the pleasure of meeting some very nice people who are of the Muslim faith. Annie
Thank you for putting into words that express the feelings of alot of writers. Your insight is a most valued piece of treasure that should be protected and at the same time shared with others. Hats off to you for a great piece of truth about writing. Great writing comes from being able to identify with your readers which ultimately means you have to feel. I will look forward to reading more of your writing. Annie
You are very creative with your writing. It was bouncy and entertaining. I especially liked the word "Plop," how wonderfully refreshing that word sounded. Grammar was very good and your poem flowed well. Truly enjoyed the experience. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your work. Annie
Absolutely wonderful. A very creative piece that your readers can actually participate in. I truly enjoyed your experience of a happy place and thank you for making it a happy place for me while reading it. Grammar was good. I liked the way you had the birds massaging my ears with their chirping. Annie
Your first paragragh is an eye catcher. You have written this poem with such strong emotions that they are clearly felt by the reader. I like that in a poem. The only part that I might suggest altering would be 4th paragragh 1st line to: I'm sick at the thought you'll love another" because that way you are not using "someone else" in sentences so close together. Other than that, your sentences flow into the next paragraghs and your grammar is good. Annie
This piece you have written momentarily caused a sadness in my heart. You wrote about a topic that the majority of humans have felt at one time or another. A good writer will draw on the emotions of his readers and you have done this. Well done and I will look forward to reading more of your pieces in the future. Annie
Enjoyed your poem very much. Your grammar was really good. Easy to follow, no confusion within this piece. Gives one a sense of preservation. Look forward to reading more of your work. I look forward to reading more of your pieces. Thank you for sharing a great piece with us all. Catch up with WDC Army Angels on this site. It is an awesome place for newbies like us. Free to join and offer great tips. Annie
This poem was different. Very impressed with your grammar. It evoked such feelings of sadness in me. Will be on the lookout for more of your work. Keep writing and enjoy this site. It has alot to offer as you probably are finding out. Check out the WDC Army Angel Site. They have alot of tips and have some awesome articles themselves. Annie
I found this to be very informative to all of us newbies. Thank you for taking the time to offer your tips on promoting porfolio's.
Sincerely, Annie@writing.com
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