Very nice concept. Excellent plot, words, idea, imagination and creation. Your writing is awesome and I would give it a rating of 4.2. Excellent and unputdownable work. The characters are very good and I would strongly recommend people to read this, because it gives a very good idea and moral. Good story, the vocabulary usage is a little low, so you should concentrate on the word usage. The story is written in a very simple manner and it's the specialty of your story, people will easily understand, what you have written. The title of the story “The legend of the what cat” is also very nicely chosen and it perfectly suits the plot and concept of the story. You should keep it up and write more stories, because your writing style is very good and understandable. People can easily learn and understand your story. The characters are very good and what more should I say to you. The story is simply great and awesome, you should think of publishing it in a magazine or something, so your creativity and imagination don’t get bound. It should be put forward in front of the world so they see that what an excellent writer you are and what is you potential. You should try squidoo, where you can put your stories, people will visit and rate your story and you can earn from this. I am giving you suggestion because you have the potential and you can do it. If you think of joining squidoo, do email me, I will guide you. The link from where you can join is http://www.squidoo.com/lensmaster/referral/retrowo...
Unputdownable and high Octane Stuff. The writer has done an awfully good job. This story is seriously like piece of art, whose idea and imagination came straight from the author’s heart. It has very nice content with and excellent starting, attractive climax and a perfect ending. There is extreme graphic violence. When I was reading the story, the picture was auto-forming in my mind and this is the sign of being a great story. The story gave me a buzz, like I have held an electrical wire with my bare hand. The plot is very good and writer should think of increasing the word count and extending the story. The author seems to be the master of fantasy genre. I am curious that how people can give it a rating of 4 stars. It should be more than 4.5. Awesome story. Specially, the main character Cayla is very beautifully carved. The title seems to be very appealing and attractive. The plot, dialogues, and characters everything is very good. The names chosen for the characters are very appealing and I can’t stop my mind revising the names and story again and again. Very very very very good story. But in my suggestion, the story should have more appealing dialogues and the word count of the story should be more then present. The people will love it more. The ratings would be 4.5 from me because I like the overall idea of the story. Good Efforts Author. Keep it up and my best wishes for you.
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