Unputdownable and high Octane Stuff. The writer has done an awfully good job. This story is seriously like piece of art, whose idea and imagination came straight from the author’s heart. It has very nice content with and excellent starting, attractive climax and a perfect ending. There is extreme graphic violence. When I was reading the story, the picture was auto-forming in my mind and this is the sign of being a great story. The story gave me a buzz, like I have held an electrical wire with my bare hand. The plot is very good and writer should think of increasing the word count and extending the story. The author seems to be the master of fantasy genre. I am curious that how people can give it a rating of 4 stars. It should be more than 4.5. Awesome story. Specially, the main character Cayla is very beautifully carved. The title seems to be very appealing and attractive. The plot, dialogues, and characters everything is very good. The names chosen for the characters are very appealing and I can’t stop my mind revising the names and story again and again. Very very very very good story. But in my suggestion, the story should have more appealing dialogues and the word count of the story should be more then present. The people will love it more. The ratings would be 4.5 from me because I like the overall idea of the story. Good Efforts Author. Keep it up and my best wishes for you.
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