very well written, presented, and thought out. Kudos!! On an OCD level, the ocean is LA Mer, but that is the only thing that stood out to me. Once again, very well written, I laud you!
Kudos
Mr. A. Nonymous
I understand and reflect and get along with the meaning of the plea, however my biggest quarrel is the lack of punctuation. For me, it tends to make my brain not pause at the end of a line, which can be a little confusing. Besides that, molto bene!!
Best
Mr. A. Nonymous
Very nice. just check you punctuation at places to keep the eye from reading to much at once. If you punctuate, pay special attention to how you punctuate
Very nice. It oddly reminds me of my poetry, although my choice of diction is different. Well presented and I like varying the ending verse at times. Molto Bene!
Mr. A. Nonymous
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