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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good, i liked the start. one thing i would say though is that say you put more detail in, i might have fallen asleep but then again most good books have a lengthy description in the beginning especially classics such as LOTR or the inheritance cycle.

if you don't mind could you check out my start, maybe give me a few pointers etc..
it would be much appreciated

4.5 well written
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