I found this to be interesting and intriguing. I wonder what the thoughts were that ran through Mary's mind about the news. Was she okay with it? did it bother her that witches did exsist and was part of their lives? was it a good thing or not?
This is interesting. I felt I could identify with the felling of the piece, yet not sure how. It brings me to a place to want to know more of what this piece is about. To me it relays a time of tearful prayer when one is in bed. Finally after the tears have flowed, sleep comes peacefully. And I believe that we are all our own biggest fear.And prayer will help us to overcome. Really good. I will be looking for more of your work. Thanks for sharing.
This is a very interesting story. And scary at the same time. Hopefully a lot of young people can read these and maybe find a little comfort to know that they are not the only one who goes through this. I really hope that things are getting or are better for you.
When I was fifteen, I went through a similar thing. But I had a really good friend in which to confide in and they helped me through before I had to go the hospital route.
Keep writing and I will keep checking, so I can finish reading your posts. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .{/b
This is really helpful to get the thoughts rolling for us to write something. Sometimes my mind goes crazy with thoughts but it's hard for me to put it to words. When there are prompts to go by, it helps to make things a little easier to jot down. Otherwise, I seem to trip all over my thoughts and words. Does that make any sense? My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
This was fun. I don't think i could see myself doing anything with moths. It was a fun way to kill time before having to leave for work and made me laugh. Good story idea. Some temp jobs could possibly that interesting I'm sure. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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