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Review of Act Your Age  Open in new Window.
Review by ReinaHW Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
'In innocence we dream of being the grown up, in adulthood we dream of being the child'

Pretty good, we are subject to many rules all through our life and we are taught to never question those rules even when the rules do not feel right.
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Review by ReinaHW Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I find I can write a female POV a lot better than a male one, years of being forced to be male has made it hard for me to think and feel as male, tends to depress me.
But sometimes I write a male character, it's very rare though.

I've found that it helps to take note of any emotional differences, males are usually expected and demanded to be more stoic and emotionally controlled while females can be more emotionally open, also noting any behavioral differences can help. Females are quite capable of being emotionally distant though and in tight control of their emotions.

So it is best to consider individual mind sets with male and female characters - something I've noticed is rarely ever considered in things like video games where males are portrayed as powerful and Godly while females are portrayed as weak and simpering, it's is tiresome when people do those stereotypes all the times without considering any individual personalities.

When writing a female characters, don't do her as a stereotype, same with males, do them as individuals and they'll develop a lot better.
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Review of Freezing To Death  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very good, gives a clear imagery while reading.
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Review of Against the Wall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Pretty good. I know all too well how it can be to be the one against the wall, never been one for parties.
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Review by ReinaHW Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Not bad, fairly builds a picture.
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Review of 50 character  Open in new Window.
Review by ReinaHW Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Okay, let's see then:

1. Name: Reina Beaumont
2. Rei, Sis, Bitch From Hell, Cursed, Legend, Mummy(as her daughter calls her in childhood, Mum,
3. Height: 5'3
4. Black Hair
5. Dark Brown Eyes
6. Cute Nose
7. Average lips
8. Looks worn out from life
9. Natural born tan to her skin
10. Average build that hides a great deal of training and acrobatic ability
11. Average Breast development
12. Is very creative with a strong understanding of tactics
13. Likes spicy food and various foods in general, is very fond of mixing cinnamon in with apple juice
14. Father: Ian Beaumont
15. Mother: Sara Beaumont
16. Childhood dreams: To be free of her life as a soldier, a life that was demanded by British Empire policy in her home universe
17. Is able to walk and step quietly
18. Much of her training had been form military training and self taught training over the years
19. Body is in excellent condition despite being alive for over a thousand years, the bio-technology forced into her body by the creators of life in her home universe - all part of experiments done by them as part of seeing how lesser evolved life forms can adapt to living beyond their natrual life spans.
20. Has medical needs to keep her emotional and medical health at acceptable levels.
21. Is very protective of her daughter
22. Is a hard worker
23. Is able to eat or as little as she wants, her condition prevents her from gaining nor losing weight
24. Physical age around 28 years of age, is over one thousand years old despite being born in 1979. Was thrown back in time by her twin sister by accident when her twin sister returned after disappearing a decade ago
25. Desires to be at peace
26. Is not fond of ignorant minded people who want to restrict lives for whatever reason
27. Makes few friends due to people's misguided fear of her condition and of the long lived
28. Takes good care of her body for her daughter's sake
29. Is very fond of nature
30. Bathes regularly
31. Makes eye contact when talking
32. Tends to speak her mind when not being quiet
33. Can be very blunt and direct
34. Adept at survival and will kill if she must, but prefers to avoid doing so
35. Is learning how to be the woman she was born as, instead of the soldier she was trained to be
36. Her condition has limits to how much it can heal her without rest, will cause her to drop into a coma or reduce her to the physical and mental age of 18 months old for six months, two hours to save her higher brain functions if the injuries she endures are too extensive.
37. Was trained in various forms of self defence, weapon use and basic field medicine
38. Loves a peaceful life, hates a military one
39. Small stature hides a very capable and dangerous person once roused
40. Walks with a very disciplined bearing
41. Enjoys writing and cooking
42. Can hit a distant target with ease thanks to her training
43. Trained in use with swords, bows and arrows and other non-projective or energy based weapons
44. Knows weak points and makes use of weak points in her opponents
45. Keeps a mental location of self and location in practice
46. Refines her tactic training as often as possible
47. Drawn toward peace
48. Goes very quiet often
49. Loves being a mother
50. Has little to no desire to travel
51. Is very stubborn and suffers from post traumatic stress disorder.

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Review of Champ  Open in new Window.
Review by ReinaHW Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good, detailed and fairly gives an image of what's happening as you read.
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Review of The mirror image.  Open in new Window.
Review by ReinaHW Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's said that the mirror doesn't lie, but it does lie if you're not cis-gender for example or not the person that many say you are or believe that you should be. Native Americans used to believe that if you looked into a mirror then your soul would be trapped behind the glass and all that would remain is an empty shell.

Nicely written, flows very nicely.
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Review of Have You Ever?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I could answer many but never answer with sincerity and warmth to most.

I have stopped to watch the sky many times and wondered many times about the who, the where and the why. I have listened to water go by, I have watched a child run by as fast as they can. I have never walked through a forest in the rain, but I have walked in the rain many times.
I have comforted a broken heart while my own heart has been broken and never comforted.

I have never felt the softness of a dove, but I have felt the softness of a kitten's fur.

I loved once, years ago, but I was betrayed for money.

I have experienced much, most of it pain and sorrow and very little cheer. But I try to hold onto something, onto my hope and longing to finally be able to be myself as best as possible.
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Review of The Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
He should have quit while he was ahead. Very good story.
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