Enjoyed everything about this short, but powerful and highly descriptive piece. Attention to detail was great. The essence of this piece was interestingly portrayed and cleverly communicated.
Captured my interest from start and especially appreciated the conclusion.
Polished and with a style of writing that works for me! Thank you. Please continue to write more!
Slick and smooth.Clear and well expressed. Loved the hints at how childhood excitement can take us in different moods. Really liked the ease and affection betwen siblings and Father. Brought a smile to my face of what an ideal day out should be with families - but is so often not the case. Love to see this piece expanded. Thank you.
Easy syle and fluid flow. Does make the reader explore the reasons for the embrace in the rain. You obviously have a good observational eye and observer of people. Romantic streak? Thankyou.
Lovely flow and format. Great analogy with the great man without being over sentimental. Powerful images.
His roots are certainly still buried in many souls. He certainly did have chips and nudges, but still lives on. Really enjoyed this tribute. Thank you.
Yes I agree, we are all searching for that inner fulfillment in all the wrong places. Buddhists would have a very different take on your interpretation of emptiness. Current and relevant theme in our contemporary society. Enjoyed - thank you.
I really do enjoy your work. It certainly works for me. It feels like you are an accomplished writer already? The depth and strength of your writing is inspiring. Sophisticated, intelligent and I wish I could communicate so effectively as you do. Poetry is not generally my bag - but this could turn me. Please continue writing. It is amongst the best quality I have come across in this site. Thank you for asking my very humble opinion.
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