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Review by Rebus Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I like the style you write in for some reason it moves fast paced yet i can catch all the detail and know exactly what your goin on about.

By the way i love your opening.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You got me in alot of trouble sir. when i was reading your article i burst out laughing in the library on the line

"I could send a cow through the mail for less money than that. This is some kind of rip-off!"

thanks to you i am now banned for 3 weeks! thank you very much!!
However i must say i have not read anything so funny in a while! i had the same experience once but i don't think i could write it as well as you have!
i got a phone call the other day asking if i would be interested in a "superolious" cat flap, and it took me 10 mins trying to tell them i don't own a cat! Then to top it off they said they would give me a free cat if i bought their catflap. :o

Stupid bloody companies!
Good read !
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Winklet I was just wondering do you write for your proffession? No matter how much I stare at this piece I can't find anything wrong with it.. not one word I would change..it is shall we say,Perfect
I really enjoy reading your writing everything is explained to thelast detail and without loosing the intrest of the reader for a second. Even though I myself don't mind spiders( arn't they lovely little fury tickly friends!) you write so compitently that i understand exactly where your coming from!
Once again an excelent piece of writing
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