This poem made me cry, as I am missing my love from thousands of miles away. Well done for stirring up those emotions. I enjoy your flow, the meaning and your heart behind it.
I love the flow of your words as well as the message as well as how it sinks into a pit of despair beginning with the insecurity of not being happy with who you are and leading into thoughts of suicide almost? I hope I'm guessing right, anyways great job. This poem could resonate with a lot of people suffering with a poor self image, knowing you're not alone can do wonders for working through this. (I'd like to clarify I'm not assuming you deal with this, but you're description of it is like you've experienced it yourself because of the depth of raw emotion I feel from this poem)
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