Interesting vignette. I can't say I'm a real fan of the woke up-from-a-dream stories, but overall it was a good story, leaving enough unsaid, to keep things ponderous. The dialog felt natural and flowed nicely. Well done.
Well, that was fun. I had no idea what to expect as I started this little nugget. Possibly a run of the mill horror? Nope, a great twist with a humorous ending.
Your writing style is easy to follow, yet not simplistic. You have used some very articulate and intelligent terminology. Though one thing did jump out at me. How could a skeleton grin? With no flesh upon his bones, he would only be "grinning" as he would only, constantly reveal his teeth. (Just a thought). Well done.
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