This is something new. I never heard of a robber taking his son with him and thinks he's playing cops and robbers. Great stuff and the dialogue was good.
I loved this story. It was a killer suspense. I also like to hide then sneak up on people, but I don't kill them. You could make the big bucks with stories like this.
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