good title , content could be better by explaining some personal examples or some philosophical lines....its a wide and never ending subject...topic either can be explained in a single line or even thousand lines will not do justification to this subject...
though your poem is full of emotions and sentiments yet it is inspirational....................... its very true everyone has to move forward in life, however whatever the circumstances may be.......................................... one thing which should never be lost is hope and of course "hope for the best"
touching heart, another title could have been leaving home................................. emotional,full of sentiments , taking your heart out................................. bond,family,togetherness, spirit of oneness...................... love all around
another title could be "discovering yourself" or " waking up from a long dream " or " coming back to reality".............. characters have been portrayed brilliantly............ play is full of emotions,scenes described touch your heart........... eye catching plot........
simple,precise and accurate poem ............ touching a person's soul, his/her internal feel ............ arousing or awakening spirit of humanity .............. making understand that each failure leads to success ............... giving a new hope , horizon and outlook
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