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Review by Rania Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Mum, don't be far away
• Mum, I'll never give up hope, I always always pray
• To see you in my dream, I've nothing else to do it's my only way
• I need you next to me, I wish It everyday
• To talk to you & listen to what you'll say
• I feel you feel me, i can't have rest & lay
• To think about myself & following my way
• I fed up being not me, I want to live today
• To be more active & find my reason to stay
• I miss all your advices to me, i am begging you don't be far away
• Mum, I'll remain asking GOD, till coming to you one day
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Review by Rania Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
• I can't ...Mum I can never
• It'd been about seven months& one year
• Sometimes I can't believe you are not here
• I can't touch you; I can't be from you near
• To be hidden safely inside you,
• I can't see you; I can't have vision so clear
• To see my way as you
• I can't do like you; I can't throw out my fear
• To be strong for my lovers&you
• I can't relieve you; I can't stop my dropping tear
• To stay alive & satisfying you
• I can't hold you; I can't bring back my sheer
• To find myself in you
• I can't be you; I can't take the boat &steer
• To not feel alone without you
• As I can't believe you'll never be anymore here
• I can never my lover Mum &so Dear
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Review by Rania Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The Fighter
Fighter
Center, pointer, lighter, enter, brighter, tighter, whiter
Writer
• Fighter... Can I be one day like you...? Can I be like you a fighter?
• Every day you wake up, you have something real to do… you are at the center
• Everything you do is turning into true… you know where the right gate to enter
• Every step you make to the right seems anew… you know how to be just righter
• Every breath you take brings life &hope to the best too… you are getting tighter
• Everyone knows you, likes to be so close to you… you are
• Every time passed after you left never let me feel adieu… you know why my brighter
• Every advice you gave me helps me to get out of the blue… you know when to make my mind whiter
• Every hug you warmed me with makes me telling GOD thank you…you are&still forever
• Fighter… Can I be one day like you…?Can I be more than a writer?
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