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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I loved ur poem, mainly because i have someone very special as well and this piece sorta sums up my feelings for her to.
love is one of the biggest reasons why the art of writing is a gift. :) i cant really say why ur poem is good to me, maybe i'm just a sucker for romance. anyway, feel free to drop by my portfolio sometime, i really would appreciate it.

-laidbackphilosopher
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Rated: E | (5.0)
remember me? Well, like I said, I am looking into your portfolio. This is a good peom, describing the horrors of war to those who have never experienced it's shadow of pain. That the cuases of war can appear both rightious or injust. (religon and lust) how it can change a person into a ghost, in more than one way. i paticularly like the repitition of phrase and i think i'll try it out in my style of writing and see how well it fits in. when i get that poem out can you tell me if this technique fits my style or not?

-laid back philosopher

P.S. if i didn't "hit the nail on the head" so to speak on what your poem means i do not mean offense. i am not trying to limit it's meaning but merely tell you my interpretation of your work. I am also a tad curious, is this poem inspired by an actual event in your life? sorry if it's a personal question.
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