Good work! You have imagined the situation extremely well and captured the emotions of the characters equally nicely. I would have liked it even more if you had made it a little longer, gone into more detail, but it's a fine read nonetheless.
I'm a newbie, so please don't scoff at the Gift Points I'm giving you. And please feel free to check out some of my work if and when you have the time. :)
Excellent! I'm a newbie too, so can't tell you much about the technical aspects of writing, but I really enjoyed reading your story. Kept me hooked till the end. Keep it up! :)
Please don't scoff at the relative lack of Gift Points, I'm kind of broke. :(
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