'Is There Light Out There' is a good poem. It captures raw relate-able feelings and the essence of depression or darkness perfectly. Although it depicted depression and emotion perfectly the structure isn't anywhere as good as that. With your writing skills I think you could aim for much better. My advice would be to bring a sense of organization into it because it seems rather haphazardly put together.
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