RaineLance's (rainelance) Reviews

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#3689265

Review of Half Blood- Prologue- Ch.2

Review by RaineLance

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

It sounds very catchy and sucked me in the second I started reading. This is something I would most deffinetly read and you should really finish it or add no chapters. I would most surely come back to read more.

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#3549455

Review of No Name

Review by RaineLance

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Eyes that sees beyond the words, In this part I think it should be see not sees. But other than that very nice work!

-Raine

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#3547680

Review of My Last Poem

Review by RaineLance

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Wow truly deep and engrossing, I found my self hanging on every word! Lovely!

-Raine

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#3547245

Review of Why You Looking So Sad?

Review by RaineLance

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Very nice.......

-Raine

5

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#3543713

Review of Phantoms

Review by RaineLance

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I think that we all can relate to this poem.

- Raine

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#3543709

Review of Love is not

Review by RaineLance

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Very deep, altough you should consider making it into a poem. I Loved this alot! Its so true and insightful.

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#3543707

Review of Natural Disasters

Review by RaineLance

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I felt like the line "A windmillbduring a tornado" didnt really flow with the poem, you should also maybe add some commas to give the readers pause. Other than those to minor things, the poem was really nice. I could feel the anxiousness of just wanting to be accepted and loved, and feel that in some weird way everyone can relate.

-Raine

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#3535503

Review of PARADOX Hitler's Granddaughter-Prologue

Review by RaineLance

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Absolutly Brilliant!

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#3530694

Review of The War Academy

Review by RaineLance

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I enjoyed it alot, if anything I think you should add more descriptive sentences, you know describe how everything looks, to paint an image for the readers mind. Other than that I say Bravo I loved and enjoyed every second of it! The begining had me laughing a bit since you referd to rain so much and my names Raine haha unfortunatly one of the downsides of having such an unusual name.

Much love, Raine

P.S. Def. consider wrighting some fantasy novels, I absolutly love all type of fantasy and would most surely buy a copy :)

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#3529539

Review of Whisper Of A Name

Review by RaineLance

Rated: E

| (5.0)

What was the name!!! haha otherwise I actually loved this short story very much, 5 stars!