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Review of Mother's approval  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello unsure,
I just finished reading your piece of MOTHER'S APPROVAL. It was a good read. The things you went through was something else. It was your mother's approval all the way through. You needed it and was looking for it to happen to you. I think you did an excellent job on this piece You made a believer out of me. That isn't an easy thing to do but you did. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Blue Soul  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Emily,
I just finished reading your piece of THE BLUE SOUL. It was a short piece but that is how I like them short and sweet. You got to the point in a hurry. It was hard to have someone star at you though. I don't think i would have liked that. Anyway you did a good piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!![image;1644262}.
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Review of Mind Made Up  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Navy Sparrow,
I just finished reading your piece of MIND MADE UP. It was a matter of fact piece to me. It was a good read. There were many pictures one could see through your words . One was walking step by step down my road. To quote you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of It's your fault  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello The Silenced,
I just finished reading your pieceof ITS YOUR FAULT. It was a good read. I was wondering though to whom you were speaking. It seems you are speaking about your parents or even God. For it was their fault for something that has happened to you. I hope you dont' blame either one for what has happened. It was the way it was supposed to be. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Experiment  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Lilith de Rais,
I just finished reading your story of THE EXPERIMENT. That was some dream you had going on in your head at the time. You expected the worst to come to Mr. Hewitt, Like they were going to open up his skull or something else. You made a believer out of me and that is the sign of a good writer. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of THE MORNING  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Pink,
I just finished reading your piece of THE MORNING. It was a great read. there was beauty within the whole piece. You character longed for her to come out and when she did it was a great thing for to happen. You painted some beautiful pictures with your words. It is hoped that this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of SUN AND SHADE  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Shimmer,
I just finished reading your piece of SUN AND SHADE. It was a magical piece and a good one. Imagine flying over the hot tar road and hitting the trees with your feet. you made a believer out of me with this piece. I believed your story. I have to say that is the sign of a good writer to make me do that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Heart with Fears  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello EAED,
I just finished reading your piece of HEART WITH TEARS. It was a sad piece but a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. It was as if you were praying almost for the light to shine upon you. You were right that He is the only One who can see the pain you were in and see also the goodness of your soul. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of THE BREEZE  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Pink,
I just finished reading your piece of THE BREEZE. it was beautiful. it was a transition from being dull and liveless to being full of joy and the good things in life. It was all due to her coming and gracing the presence of someone that someone was you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!{image;1644262}.
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Review of Confused Delusion  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello S.L. Rayne,
I just finished reading your piece of CONFUSED DELUSION. It was a short piece but a good one. I liked how you used your metaphors in this piece. It made perfect sense. Heat will surely get you for sure. It will make you crave for water and a cool place to be. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ragingbuddist,
I just finished your piece of CAMPAIGNING OUT OF BED. It was a piece i didn't understand all that well. I hope you will email me and explain it to me. Though I didnt' understand all of it I still thought it was a good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Stretching Nets  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Aayavi,
I just finished reading your piece of STRETCHING NETS. It was a good read and one that is without mistakes. I liked how you made this love like fishing nets and the strength of those nets entertwined together. You did a good job. There is so much to say about this piece that I can't think of them all. But it was a great job done. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Rellik,
I just finished reading your story of THE LOVE STORY FOR ALL LOVERS. It was a good piece but very sad at the end. Drew had saved Kylee's life and then at the end both of them lost their lives together. I was looking for a happy ending to the story. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Stupid Things  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello The Silenced,
I just finished reading your piece of STUPID THINGS. You made it sound so simple. I liked the piece very much. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did an excellent job. i liked the rhyming scheme. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Ode to the Busker  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Robbie,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of ODE TO THE BUSKER. It was a good piece. One could see him playing and hearing the music he was delivering. A man with a fiddle and that was all. He had one thing to do and that was to play. His case held the money tha people dropped in. It was easy to see what you said and it made perfect sense to me. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Road to nowhere  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello skitzy,
I am reading almost everythingyou have written. It seems so anyway. I just finished reading your piece of ROAD TO NOWHERE. It was a good read thouh there were mistakes all through the piece. the word planned is spelled just that way not planed. There were more words to notice when you edit the piece as I hope you will do that are spelled wrong. Other than that it is a good piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Loving Hands  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello skitzy,
Will you just look at this piece? It is a great one. I just finished reading your pieceof LOVING HANDS. How right you are that it is God's hands that are holding you up. It is God for everything and every purpose. You brought this out so beautifully in your piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Mom and Dad  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello skitzy,
I have to say we meet again. I just finished reading your piece of MOM AND DAD. It is a good tribute to them for all the hard work they did in helping you to grow. It is something beautiful for you to write. You did a good job withthis piece. I hope you are proud of this piece for you should be. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of I Love You  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello skitzy,
We meet again. It is Beeline here. I just finished reading your pieceof I LOVE YOU. It was a touching piece that you wrote. it is sad that you are or your character is in jail. There must be a reason why you or your character is. However you dont' disclose thatt. The important thing is that you love your parents very much. And that they aren't only your parents but your friends too. That is a good way to feel about your parentss. you did a good job with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of you once knew  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello skitzy,
I have to say we meet again. I just finished reading your piece of YOU ONCE KNEW. It was a short piece but a good one. I noticed that the word new was standing for the word knew in the first line. However, that didn't take away from the story. I liked it where you said "and keep mistakes far and few. That is the way to be. Not being the person you once were is a good thing. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of My Dark World  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello LadyAbbie,
I just finished reading your piece of MY DARK WORLD. It was sad but a good read. There were few mistakes found in the whole piece. You may want to edit this and see for yourself the mistakes I am talking about. It didn't disract from the story though. It was a good read as I said before. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of in the end  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello her_majesty,
I just finished reading your piece of IN THE END. It was a good poem and one that is well meant. You are so rigth about the future and how we are on earth being just visitors. You hit the nail on the head so to speak. The structure was solid. it was a good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of stepping stones  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello skitzy,
I just finished reading your piece of STEPPING STONES. It was a short piece but a good one. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was an excellent job you did. Stepping stones is the hard part to do sometimes for it is stumbling blocks in the way, You had a few errors here in the piece. At least I think it was an error. The part where you said "make'ere" did you mean make their life is flown a stumbling block. If so that makes sense. I just didnt' know. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of My type of guy  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Miss Shellz,
I just finished reading your piece of MY TYPE OF GUY. It was a touching and moving story The pain she went through with so many things happening to her was awful. it was Daniel to the rescue and did just that. He loved Michelle and was going to marry her. What a happy ending to this story for them to be together. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello EvilDawg,
I just finished reading your piece of THE JOURNEY. It was a good story. The boats were seen and the ever arguing Samantha was heard as to what she said. It was a beautiful ending to the piece. You were safe and sound in the or on the island you found. I am glad to hear that. I believe this is fiction but you made a believer out of me. I hope this finds youwell. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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