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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
Review by eva anderson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The story really affirmed that we can trust our intuition, it plays a vital role in our decision making in certain aspects of our life, lets say for instance in this story wherein Kevin already has an intuition that something bad may happen if they are going to pursue with their plan and that is to have an adventure at The Fun House. But still he ignored his intuition and still continue going there that leads to the disappearanceof Becky and Johnny. Until now he's suffering for the feeling of guilt. The story taught us to trust our intuition to keep us safe from harm . The writer was very effective in featuring the highlights of the story, each scene is very well created and envisioned. You can imagine how frightened the children were during those time, and as a reader we are properly guided by the intense actions one step at a time. CONGRATULATIONS.
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Review of Make a Difference  Open in new Window.
Review by eva anderson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
We can always make a difference in our own special way, like what Darryl is showing and sharing to these children. Instead of them be drowned with vices they can resort to these types of recreation which is very helpful in exploring their knowledge and skills. The writer is effective is providing details of the goodness and kindness of these good samaritan that we may encounter in our day to day struggle. He was able to show how to be optimistic in every bad day we had experienced.
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Review of Oh Darling...  Open in new Window.
Review by eva anderson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
The writer is very effective in showing his emotions, his regrets on his previous marriage. It indicates that regrets always comes in the end. If both of them only give each other a chance to love and be loved and save their marriage . Then they should n't have separated at all.Now they suffered the consequences. I love the poem very much.
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