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Rated: E | (3.5)
Ahh this made me nostalgic for my own high school years. You definitely invoked the bitter-sweet ending and leaving friends, which I enjoyed. The wordage and rhyming was also pleasant for the most part. There are some little things to cover through editing like 'miss our our class' and the addition of punctuation.

I think punctuation would really help the flow and make this even more enjoyable. Good job!
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