This is my biggest fear. To lose the love of my life (26 years). I could not bear to go through it. What I would like to know, is...what happens to her now? My deepest sympathies...
I liked the overall concept, however, I was jumping all over the place without any sort of rhythm. Maybe it would have worked for me better if it had either rhythm or rhyme all the way through. But, I really liked what you were saying.
I love this. I felt your love and hope to be with her forever. And then I felt your pain when forever ended too quickly. Love is Hope and Pain. I have loved my husband since I was 14. It's 25 years later now and the thought of not spending my life with him leaves me speechless. So I would say that you are most definitely a master of words. Please keep writing.
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