Thanks for taking me so accurately back to the office environment - I don't miss it! You started us right where the action was, with Frank grumbling about the lazy Gina. I love that the email was accidentally sent and I'd love to know what happens next.
I do wonder at Gina's successful skiving of work and the nature of her relationship with the boss.
This poem appears to be about a love that is not reciprocated- seeking the unattainable. I wonder who the brown eyed girl is.
I liked the personification of the wind.
I enjoy some guess work in poems so, to that end, a bit more detail that suggests a deeper story might have added more interest.
Nicely written.
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