Really liked this!!! I find it highly relatable because of the personal level that it is written on. I think it has good purpose and meaning in your wording.
Excellent imagery! I could picture each individual stanza as if it was playing out right in front of me. Very good poem considering the everyday type of topic!!!
I enjoyed this poem. You had really detailed wording but it didn't get to wordy. The rhyming aspect added a lot to it too. There was a lot of imagery and it flowed very well----no complaints.
Good Imagery, I like all the descriptions. The first stanza, particularly the four lines of it, are very well worded. The ending wasn't anticipated, I liked that too.
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