I really liked it! Your story was compact with no wasted words and right to the point. I didn't see the little twist at the end coming and it added to the overall.
Excellent!!! You've captured the want, the lust and the sexual pleasure of your characters. Being a male, I would naturally enjoyed some more description of your nameless female, The interaction of your characters afterwards was well done - believable.
I really did enjoy reading your story. I can offer a few tips. Make your paragraphs at least 3 sentences to improve flow. After introducing you characters, you could use just pronouns - he/she.
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