Excellent story, but so sad. I feel so bad for the both of them, dying in such a way. Keep writing, you are really good. your details are superb and the events flow so smoothly. thank you for a wonderful read.
This story is quite interesting. It's sad that Righty had to die, but karma came back to him, as it always does. At first I did not think I was going to like the story, but is has some good lessons in it.
1) Meet your goals before you try to get what you want. The goals must be more important, because you SET THEM.
2) Most people are greedy, but this does NOT mean that ALL people are greedy.
3) If you get a chance to do something great in your life, take that chance.
4) Continue striving to meet your goals until the moment of your death.
There are probably more that I cannot think of right now.
Keep up the good work!
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