I like this story. Has that Cormac McCarthy feel of being dropped into the middle of a story. That is a good thing in my opinion. I like the way the mood moved. It is an easy vibe to relate to, regardless of the setting. I am always transported by your details.
A very quietly intense story. I could feel the relationship between the cold and isolation. But then there is a glimmer of hope with the little girl. It lead me to wonder.
Congratulations! That was a real tear-jerker! That was very beautiful, and imaginative. Your mastery of story telling really shines though. I'm so glad to be able to read you again!
~q
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