Once upon a time there was a scared woman. Everyday, this woman would go through the motions of life, flinching at her own shadow. One day, she realized she was living in an abusive relationship. Because of that, she conjured enough strength to reach out for help from family and friends. Until finally, she was able to take herself out of the situation and smile asc herself again.
Hey! I jut read "Mile High" and it's good! I love the structure of Quatrains, and you followed it very well! I really don't think that I could find anything to change, it's good as it is. MY favorite line is the second line. I love where you use the words "exclusive" and "elusive".
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