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Review by lhquapparino Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing this. I especially appreciate articles like this that express the need to treat people with respect and without bias. Your title concept 'No big 'I's or little YOUs' is an expressed that I too have heard, however I believe that you have demonstrated that you truly understand it's meaning. Each of your ideas was presented clearly and were well written. Reading it was inspirational. As I get older I think of my own mortality and I agree that death truly is the great equalizer. Thank you for this awesome piece of writing.

Linda Quap (aka Quapparino)
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Review by lhquapparino Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story and specially enjoyed imagining a world where we could pay a cab by using a fingerprint. Fascinating. I enjoy technology and your story contains a great deal of it from drones to Xeno-scanners. I also enjoyed speculating how Forqe was disguising himself as Mr. Dinkle Gubble (unique names too). Especially thought provoking was the sentence Galactic New Year: Tomorrow. This raised an interesting question for me as a reader, I wondered whether the mazarians would realize that since tomorrow never comes the New Year might be put off indefinitely...Just an observation. This was a very unique story and I enjoyed it immensely. I realize you may not have intended for that possible interpretation of your last line, however I think the fact that it's possible to misinterpret it, makes the ending more fascinating since as a reader I have to wonder if and when the Galactic new year will take place.
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